Neither body paragraph represents effective causal analysis. ... causes; consider remote or immediate chains. 2. Revise one of the developmental paragraphs in the student essay above. ... sure enough, when I saw Mary, she said helloawith causalityahecause I dreamed it, Mary was caused (by my dream) to say hello ... Again, because the two events occurred in time togetherabuying a car, finding a boyfriend/girlfriendaone event is wrongly perceived to have caused the other.
|Title||:||The Inventive Writer|
|Author||:||Michael E. Cooley|
|Publisher||:||D C Heath & Company - 1993|